This was the first draft of my film and in summary I was not very happy with it. I felt that the story was overly simplistic and it doesn’t really reflect what I am capable of. As a result of this I have decided to start again and begin from scratch. I believe I first need to readdress the theme and narrative of my story by creating something that will challenge traditional conventions and audience expectations. If I can do this then I believe my production will be more successful and better maintain the interest of the audience. I currently believe that if this was to be made into a full film the audience would likely be bored and not provide a very positive review.